在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;衔接成分偏少;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写方面也要加强。
I have a good friend, His name is Tu ChenHui. She is good at reading and playing computer.She very likes black hair beacuse it looks like more beautiful. We are classmate in high school. I remember she usually helps me when I have difficult. I hope we are the best friend forever.