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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12877
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;作者在句法层面做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

As is vividly shown in the picture,only can the parents inform their child of coming downstairs for something to eat by computer.It reflects an universal phenomenon in contemporary society that children are immersed in the virtual world in the computer. As far as I am concerned,Internet is a double-edged sword.It takes great convenience to our life,and without it,the world would not be colorful and marvelous.However,it is Internet that steals the time from our daily life,meanwhile the time we spend on face-to-face contact is diminished,but the truth is that face-to-face contact is of importance to us,we cannot permit Internet replacing it,or we will be indifferent to the reality and your family,also you will be awkward to the basic communication by face to face. In a word,face-to-face contact is a elementary skill and principle to our human beings,we ought to value it,instead of replace it by overusing the computer.

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