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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4567
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
评语:

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

The impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication Recently, there is a heated topic about the impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication. Some people believe that it will destroy our relationship with others, while others argue that internet is beneficial for us to make more friends. As for me, all the above opinions make sense, and I intend to show the advantages of internet in communication to counterbalance its shortcoming. Firstly, internet can help us to broaden our horizons and make more friends from different filed and countries. As we all know, the world is infinite, but our life circles are limited, at that times, internet provides us with many different kinds of way to contact various people. Secondly, Internet supplies us with a way to solve our private relational problem more smoothly than face-to-face. In our daily life, we may have some conflicts with our friends, and we are easier to speak out harmful words to our friends although that is not really we want. However, internet gives us a way to express our feelings through the screen, which we can clam down to solve our problem, then our conflict can be settled more faster. Finally, from what we have discussed above, we can conclude that everything has two sides, what we can do is to use its advantages but not just think its bad sight.

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