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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织。
To :KPOHsales@hotmail.com Hellow,my friend. My name is Hu Bin ,i am a agensse of a compurny I had know about the number of 5670 product that cames from your cumpness from an exibition which in New York from December 15th to 22th , and i am very intrested in it. So i hope you can send to me a price list and instruction about it .Pllease. Finally, thanks for your part to us , i wish we can have an establish business relationship. From: hubin@163.com.
