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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11321
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分80.0分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

As is seen from the above picture, using a mobile phone on the streets is becoming universal.It describes vividly that people are increasingly dependent on their phone. It is accurate to state that the mobile phone has bought a lot of convenience to our life.However, we can't ignore the harm of the overusing of the phone.First, when people are addicted to the phone, they usually will pay fewer attentions to the surroundings, leading more threat to their security.Second, over using the phone will decrease the time to communicate with other people.Lacking talking with others, especially our family and friends, will make the real life bad.Third, using the phone is a type which was affected seriously to our eyes.Numerous young people can't live without the glass may originate in this. All and all, everything composes of two sides.We enjoy the benefactions from the phone but we will be reliant on it.We should be used appropriately.

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