2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨。

As is seen from the picture above, using a mobile phone on the streets is becoming universal.It describes vividly that people are increasingly dependent on their phone. It is accurate to state that the mobile phone has brought a lot of convenience to our life.However, we can't neglect the harm of the overusing of the phone.First, when people are addicted to the phone, they usually will pay fewer attention to the surroundings, leading more threat to their security.Second, over using the phone will decrease the time to communicate with other people.Lacking talking with others, especially our family and friends, will make the real life bad.Third, using the phone is a type which was affected seriously to our eyes.Numerous young people can't live without the glass may originate in this. All and all, everything has two sides.We enjoy the benefactions from the phone but we will be reliant on it.We should be used appropriately.