2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；句法知识较好，但需加强句式变化；作者能词汇表达较准确熟练，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

Since computer invented the technology about computer become perfect and intelligence .And conections are stronger .In our life , you can see computer everywhere they're best friends to our study and work. But on the other hand, there are some bad effections too.Such as nectwork addiction amoung teenagers.Lots of students because of nectwork addiction don't want to go to school and make their parents sad and disappointed about their appearances,but it have much more good .Internet help many students find informations online and know everything they want .It helps some students while it distoried some one . So the fact is whether computer make good or bad effections it depends on our own.