2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；能够运用简单的从句，但不熟练；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，另外文中有较多拼写错误。

In China The most worthyplace have to beijing。beijing is the capital of china，it is a long history city.so if my foreign friend is gong to visit my hometown,I will recommend him the beijing. beijing not only have long history art but also is most foreign crowed,beijing have more seasight,such as GreatWall、gugong、tiananmen