2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；能够运用简单的从句，但不熟练；作者词汇量偏小，且文章中拼写错误较多。

In China The most worthyplace have to beijing。beijing is the capital of china，it is a long history city.so if my foreign friend is gong to visit my hometown,I will recommend him the beijing. beijing not only have long history art but also is the most foreigns crowed,beijing have more interestingplaces,such as GreatWall、gugong、tiananmensquare.The food is famous of beijing dark,it is so delicious.