2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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In China The most worthy of places have to beijing。beijing is the capital of china，it is a long history city.so if my foreign friend is gong to visit my hometown,I will recommend him the beijing. China is a very beautiful country with a long history .Many foreigners came for the fame . beijing not only have long history art but also is the most foreigns crowed,beijing have more interestingplaces,such as GreatWall、gugong、tiananmensquare.In China have says gonging that"He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man" The food is famous of beijing dark,it is so delicious.