2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用偏少；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，可是单词拼写做的不错。

when it comes to a beautiful city,Beijing,the most beautiful,pops out in my mind.there are many beautiful attraction in Beijing.however,the first attraction that flash in my mind is the Great Wall.The great wall,used to ward off invaders symbolizes Chinese's diligence and persistence.therefore,there are old says:a man who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.besides,the forbiden city is both attractive and magnificent.