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2005年6月18日英语四级作文真题:教师节

发布时间:2013-05-17 00:23浏览次数:1113
要求:
Teacher‟s Day :    
1. 向老师致以节日的问候。   
2. 回忆件老师的教诲中难忘的事情。   
3. 我如何报答老师。
用户的作文(系统评分65.0分
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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Happy Teacher's Day. I never forget my College English Teacher, Mrs. wang, she is a well and nice lady. Now I still remember she told me a few words how to conduct oneself and doing something. One day, I had picked up an exercise English book on floor of our classroom. I found that is a wonderful book. One month ago, I looked for it, but I can't got it. I need it and hide and read it. At next day, my classmate, Xiao Ming was looking for it, but I didn't back him. Pass two days, I received a message from my English teacher. She said how to conduct oneself and ding something. I knew her meaning that she knew I picked up this book. On Fifth day, I furtively took the book on his desk. From then on, I never forget my English words. I want to say that thank you to my English teacher. And I want to say her that Now I am an honest man.

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