题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰。
As time goes by,people become more and more distrust each other.We need trust. Trust makes our life beautiful.Last weekend I went back school by bus and a girl asked me to borrow her some money because she can't afford the ticket and she will send the money to me after she arrived at home.I hesitate for a minute.I didn't know whether her words are true or not.Finally,I lent some money to her and she really returned it to me some hours later.What will happen if I didn't lend money to her?I think she maybe can't go back home.My own experience tells me that we should always trust others. As far as I'm concerned,we should always keep on maintaining trust.We should give others help if we can.Just believing that kind-hearted men are more than bad men.Our society will become warmer with trust. Therefore,it is not difficult to draw to the conclusion that we should always keep a trust heart and give others a hand when they are in trouble.