2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

A Beatiful City In China I am enjoyable to hear that my foreign friend will come to visit my homeown,in oder to reward his entertainment in America,this is a necessary thing that I would like to take him to Zhangjiajie in Hunan. There are three major reasons for going to Zhangjiajie,first ,it stands for a unique natural scene,which makes lots of foreign friends are willing to visit,I think you can receive a different feels about it,second,peaceful you maight be,by appreciating the sight,we all both obtain a kind of pleasure emotion,last but not least, you are able to recieve friendship. By visiting zhangjiajie in Hunan, you will kown the diffenrence terms of china,I sure you that you will like this wonderful experience.