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It maybe our common desires to experience a meaning life, but when it comes to the topic “How to live a meaningful life”, the opinions are divided. In someone’s eyes, they agree that a meaningful life is just a comfortable life which means they can enjoy themselves as possible as they can. However,in my view, if we spend our whole life in things only for ourselves, we will let ourselves down when we look back. If there is a way to avoid a disappointed life, it should be to try our best to find meaningful things which can also make contributions to the whole society. Even a single man can make a big difference to the world. Not to mention that everyone get together to bring changes to the society. It’s high time that we took measures to experience a meaning life. What’s more, it’s never too late to start a meaning life. So be yourself, enjoy your happiness and be helpful to others. That’s the meaning life worth living.
