2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Dear Anna: Welcome to my hometown, the capital of China——Beijing. There are great number of famous place you can visit there,like the Great Wall,the Palese Museum,the Bird Nestle GYM.In my opinion,you'd better to visit the Great Wall.It is the most famous scenic spots around the world.It's built in B.C.214 year,people used it to protect the border.Nowaday,old Beijing people always say"If you haven't visited the Great Wall,you are not called a man." So,many Chinese young people,visit the Great Wall on their summer vacation. Would you like to visit the Great Wall with me?