2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误。

Nowadays,a saying,it is unwise to put all your eggs in the one basket, has brought a hoe debate.In other words,we should pay much attention something else rather than iust a thing which you are beloved. Numourous example can illustrate this phenomenon in our daily life.On the one hand,with the repaidly development of the economic,an increacing number person invest in business.We should put our money in many filed not only one.Then,we can avoid losting all money in one program.On the other hand,students,in school,should learn all courses,instanding of the favoriate courses.Only do this ,can we get the ideal progress. In short,we should have been thought twice before we take action.Personally speaking,I thought it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.