2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

Nowadays,a saying,it is unwise to put all your eggs in the one basket, has brought a hoe debate.In other words,we should pay much attention something else rather than just a thing which you are beloved. Numourous example can illustrate this phenomenon in our daily life.On the one hand,with the economic repaidly development,an increacing number of person invest in business.We should put our money in many fileds not only ones.Then,we can avoid losting all money in one program.On the other hand,students,in school,should learn all courses,instanding of the favoriate courses.Only do this,can we get the ideal progress. In short,we should have been thought twice before we take action.Personally speaking,I thought it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.