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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10396
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。

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Nowadays,a saying,it is unwise to put all your eggs in the one basket, has brought a hoe debate.In other words,we should pay much attention something else rather than just a thing which you are beloved. Numrous example can illustrate this phenomenon in our daily life.On the one hand,with the economic rapidly development,an increasing number of person invests in business.We should put our money in many filed not only one.Then,we can avoid losting all money in one program.On the other hand,students,in school,should learn all courses,instead of the favourite courses.Only do this,can we get the ideal score. In short,we should have been thought twice before we take action.Personally speaking,I thought it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.

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