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Nowadays Spring Gala has become more colorful than before.Many new types appear on the stage with the promote of the cutting-edge technology.Maybe some can't accept the change of it.This essay I will talk about it. Some people still like watching Spring Gala although it has been changed.They think that CCTV's programme is typical and is valuable to watch.It is their minds that cause this phenona.Often they are willing to accept that change which is a new performance.However,others don't think so.they would rather the Spring Gala doesn't change,so this group is mainly the old. In my opinion,the change of Spring Gala is necessary,only the change of it can it develope better