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2006年12月英语四级作文真题:春节晚会

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:06浏览次数:1680
要求:
1、许多人喜欢看cctv 春节晚会;
2、但有的人认为应该取消; 
3、你的看法   
用户的作文(系统评分66.0分
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文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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Nowadays Spring Gala has become more colorful than before.Many new types appear on the stage with the promote of the cutting-edge technology.Maybe some can't accept the change of it.This essay I will talk about it. Some people still like watching Spring Gala although it has been changed.They think that CCTV's programme is typical and is valuable to watch.It is their minds that cause this phenona.Often they are willing to accept that change which is a new performance.However,others don't think so.they would rather the Spring Gala doesn't change,so this group is mainly the old. In my opinion,the change of Spring Gala is necessary,only the change of it can it develope better

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