2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

文章衔接手法恰当；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章词汇表达丰富，高级词汇积累做的也很棒。

Is it wise to make friends online? With the rapid improvement in Internet，there is an expanding number of persons who are fond of making friends online.And recently，the behavior has become the focus of public concern.As far as I‘m concerned,it isn't wise to make friends online.My thesis will be divided into several parts. At first,a recent investigation indicated that people who enjoy making friends online always be unsociable.Wasting too much time on the Internet,people ignore the real world inevitably.Beyond any doubt，the more and more popularly the computer network is used，the more and more strongly the customer depends on the Internet.Secondly,as the virtual technology progress，the online social networking is increasingly confusing.There are numerous scammers on the net.Do not trust others reailly.The majority of people can't distinguish truth from falsehood in Internet.Last but not least，the net's temptation is too big.There is a lot of unsavory material available on the Internet.If we have not superior self control,we will gradually turn into a terrible man. All in all,we should pay more attention to the real world and make more friends in it.only in this way，can we be better and better.