语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。
Just like a saying goes,Seen is real.However,it is unsmart to have a conclusion at once when we see or hear somehing. There are several reasons as followed.First of all,it is not real when we see or hear,beacause we may be only know the several of fact.Secondly,we often just haven't deep thought ideal It is important to hold to our topic.In my opinion,I think that we need a deep thought about how is it happened before we draw a effet.
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