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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8979
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨。

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There has been a heated discussion about the judgment of a person's appearance in the society. People’s opinions differ greatly concerning this phenomenon. Is it wise to judge a person by his appearance? It is definitely not. This phenomenon does reveal that judge a person by his appearance is not only harmful, but also damaging. The past decade has witnessed a huge development in society owing to the work of facial operate, bringing some problems at the same time, with the above one being the foremost. What's more, the public fails to attach due attention to inner beauty. By doing so, a numerous of people will go to correct their face normally. In a word, it is unwise to judge a person by his appearance. Admittedly, it is unwise to judge a person's appearance, so people should treat a person through his inner beauty not his appearance.

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