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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10396
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文中衔接词丰富。

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There is a saying saying that it it unwise to pull all eggs in one basket,which is very thought-provoking.This saying tells us an undeniable truth that it is wise to put eggs into different baskets that we shoule take many factors into consideration and get better prepared.Is it wise to put all eggs in one basket? It is definitely not. This phenomenon does reveal that judge a person by his appearance is not only harmful, but also damaging. The past decade has witnessed a huge development in society owing to the work of facial operate, bringing some problems at the same time, with the above one being the foremost. What's more, the public fails to attach due attention to inner beauty. By doing so, a numerous of people will go to correct their face normally. In a word, it is unwise to judge a person by his appearance. Admittedly, it is unwise to judge a person's appearance, so people should treat a person through his inner beauty not his appearance.

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