高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Thanks for your help. If we have cargo to send in the future ,I will make an appointment with you in advance and please notice Ai Fai to unload and sign for us,thank you! If we have cargo to send in the future ,I will make an appointment with you in advance and please notice Ai Fai to unload and sign for us,thank you!