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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10396
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;高级词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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There has been a heated discussion about cooperation in society. While in the society, some people treat themselves more than the other, which overlook the cooperation. People’s opinions differ greatly concerning this phenomenon. The phenomenon does reveal that do something just by oneself is not only waste time but also less effective. The past decade has witnessed a huge development in society owing to the cooperation; bringing many companies go on abroad. What’s more, cooperation help people innovation and create more fantastic things. In a word, cooperation can bring more benefits than self doing. Admittedly, it is wise to cooperate with others, which help improve yourself too. So people should have more cooperation spirit.

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