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There has been a heated discussion about cooperation in society. While in the society, some people treat themselves more than the other, which overlook the cooperation. People’s opinions differ greatly concerning this phenomenon. The phenomenon does reveal that do something just by oneself is not only waste time but also less effective. The past decade has witnessed a huge development in society owing to the cooperation; bringing many companies go on abroad. What’s more, cooperation help people innovation and create more fantastic things. In a word, cooperation can bring more benefits than self doing. Admittedly, it is wise to cooperate with others, which help improve yourself too. So people should have more cooperation spirit.