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Expo 2010 Shanghai China will be a great event to explore the full potential of urben life in the 21st century. It starts on May 1st and ends on October 31st,lasting 184 days with the theme “Better City,Better life”,representing the common wish of the whole humankind for a better living in future urbern environmente. Expo 2010 Shanghai China will also be a grand international gatering.Participants will display urbern civilization to the full extent,exchanging their experiences of urbern development, and explore new approaches to human habitat,lifestyle and working conditions in the new century.They will learn now to create an eco-friendly society and maintain the sustainable development. Being th first World Expo on the theme of city,Expo 2010 will attract about 200 nations and international organizations to take part in the exhibition as well as 70 million various from home and abroad. I am proud to say Expo 2010 Shanghai China is evidence that our country is developing fast and becoming more powerful. There is no doubt that it’ll promote the development of the service industry and accelerate the pace of China’s development.China will surely have a bright future and become an advanced country.