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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17431
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分69.0分
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简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

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With the rapid development,whatever you do and wherever you are,you use the computer frequently.Computerplays a role in our life. Every coin have two sides.Using computer brings us advantages and disadvantages. Although sometimes we use it for some undirect place.For example doing homework,i t's unwise to use it to search the right answer without deep thought for completing task, Thus,we need to recognize how to use it properly. In my opinion, I think that computer are overweight advantages than disadvantages. First of a place,we can depend on it to search useful infomations.Secondly,we can makes friends by computer social platform.What’s more,it’s convenience for us to use it. In conclusion,computer is the helpful in our daily life,we need to proper use it.Thus it can brings a better life for us.

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