2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown ,is a city ,which told "a city ,if you come, you don't want to leave." Of course, my hometown is ChengDu. In my hometown, there are so many places where I would like to take you to see. The first place is Jingli.The reason why would I like to take you seeing here is there is a stage which making you feel Chinese cutural.