高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文章组织结构良好；句式偏短，建议加强复杂句的使用；文中用词稍显贫乏，文中存在一些拼写错误。

my hometown My hometown is palnted many trees .They were growthing so tall so beautiful.There is a rives that fish can be looked everwhere we go.Rooms like simply and streets is limited.Now ,tall buildings ,factories,shops you can see anywhere.devoleping of indursty leads to bad enviroment.Trees were decreased ,fishes were dissepointed.