高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；语言不流畅；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

Thanks for your help.Attached cargo receipt for your reference,thank you!Thanks for your help.Attached cargo receipt for your reference,thank you!Thanks for your help.Attached cargo receipt for your reference,thank you! If we have cargo to send in the future ,I will make an appointment with you in advance and please notice Ai Fai to unload and sign for us,thank you!