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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强；全文结构较为严谨。
Now a lot of people want to visit elite school, especially the University campus. Because the view of University is perfect, when you stand here, you will believe this place is a heaven. They want to feel quiet life in it and away busy and noise city. Should the University campus be open to tourists? I know that a great number of people agree with that the University campus is open for tourists. For example, last week, I have already visited Xia Men University campus. It is a really nice place, but some guys threw these rubbish anywhere. And tourists are too much to keep queit on campus. It's very noisy so that the students can't study. So my answer is "No". I hope that we will offer a nice and queit place to the students.
