2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

高级词汇能比较准确的使用，不过拼写错误稍多；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩。

Nowadays a majority of prodcts concered to be excessed packaged.In my point of view,there are reasons as follow accounting to the phenomenon.On one hand,more and more sellers by the means of excessive packaging raise the rice of product in order to purchase high porofits.On the other hand,customs who aim to give presents to boss or relatives often focus on the package to show their respect for the gifts receiver.Excessing package is not only add the stress to costumers but also is not environment friendly .As far as I am concerned ,practice economy is the trend of China.For rapid economic development ,we should be economical.And the company should think for customers,reduce the unnecessary package,attach more to the quality of products.