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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12932
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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用户练习作文:

In this years,people communicate in the Internet isvery hot.Electronic communication is more and more popular to us.Besides the young and the old, they are accept to communicate in the Internet willingly.Someone has beginning to complain that electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. I don't deny communicate in the internet is so convinience for us.We could talk with people who has went for a trip.We can talk to others need not go out the room.But that also face a big question is we could not see the person.You never know he or she the real mind they think. I think talk face to face is neccessary for us at the daily life.It can promote us friendship. It can make others know the real you.

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