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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12932
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章层次较为清晰。

用户练习作文:

These years,people communicate on the Internet are very hot.Electronic communication is more and more popular to us.Besides the young and the old, they accept to communicate on the Internet willingly.Someone has beginning to complain that electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. I don't deny communicate in the internet is so convinience for us.We could talk with people who has went for a trip.We can talk to others need not go out the room.But that also face a big question is we could not see the person.You never know he or she the real mind they think. I think talk face to face is necessary for us at the daily life.It can promote us friendship. It's easy to exchange each other.

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