Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Accorading to the bar chart displays that the education level is higher,the earnings is more and unemployment rate is lower,which indicates that education plays an inmportant role in higher eranings and lower unemployment.Apparently,there are two main cause of the phenomena.On the one hand,higher education can make you more intelligent and capality,the knowledge and skills acquired at college make you can be equalifity for some important position.On the other hand ,more and more enterprises attach importance to emloyees's record of formal schooling. To my understanding,to find a satisfy job and increase earnings ,we shuld receive higher education and pay more on education,which can create a bright futuer for us.