2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Accorading to the bar chart displays that the education level is higher,the earnings is more and unemployment rate is lower,which indicates that education plays an important role in higher earnings and lower unemployment.Apparently,there are two main causes of the phenomena.On the one hand,higher education can make you more intelligent and capality,the knowledge and skills acquired at college make you can be equalifity for some important position.On the other hand ,more and more enterprises attach importance to emloyees's record of formal schooling. To my understanding,to find a satisfy job and increase earnings ,we shuld receive higher education and pay more on education,which can create a bright futuer for us.