Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者能较准确地使用高级词汇,不过存在个别拼写错误;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
Accorading to the bar chart displays that the education level is higher,the earnings is more and unemployment rate is lower,which indicates that education plays an important role in higher earnings and lower unemployment.Apparently,there are two main causes of the phenomena.On the one hand,higher education can make you more intelligent and capality,the knowledge and skills acquired at college make you can be competent for some important positions.On the other hand ,more and more enterprises attach importance to emloyees' record of formal schooling. To my understanding,to find a satisfy job and increase earnings ,we shuld receive higher education and pay more on education,which can create a bright futuer for us.