2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者高级词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇丰富度要加强；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；复杂句使用不错，句法规范。

Accorading to the bar chart displays that the education level is higher,the earnings is more and unemployment rate is lower,which indicates that education plays an important role in higher earnings and lower unemployment.Apparently,there are two main causes of the phenomena.On the one hand,higher education can make you more intelligent and capability,the knowledge and skills acquired at college make you can be competent for some important positions.On the other hand ,more and more enterprises attach importance to emloyees' record of formal schooling. To my understanding,to find a satisfy job and increase earnings ,we shuld receive higher education and pay more on education,which can create a bright futurefor us.