2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

When it comes to the famous scenic spots ,Labor Park is absolutely an interesting place for sightseeing.My hometown is a splendied and quiet city by the sea,among so many attractive and well-kown sightseeing spots ,why I choose Labor Park is not only because of its glorious scenery but also its long history.The park is by the sea,and the square is great and beautiful.During the summer day ,many people will swim in the clean blue seawater.And in the evening ,old people will dance in the square,the children will do sports,and the young couple will date and walk along the park.Everyone there can enjoy the comfort of cool sea breeze.In the park,you can feel the real life of my hometown and relax yourself.I am really looking forward your visit to my hometown.