拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨。
Nowadays,a great amount of information fills up our mind by internet,newspapers,television,etc.It’s wonderful for us to keep so much information that we can not acquired ever.What’s more,we have gained many ways to get what we want to know.However,as the saying goes,” a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention”.With information explosion,our minds will be disturbing or lacking of concentration.As a conclusion,it’s vital for us to maintain the skill that avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. I am pleased to show my opinions as follows.First of all,though information all about it,what we should do is not avoid it,but face up with it.In addition,now that we can not avoid it,in other ways,it is wise to sort out of it.In details,it means that we should distinguish useful information from those that distracts us.Only in that way,can we dispose the information wisely and make it helpful to us.In a word,classifying the information is worthwhile.