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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5735
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,a great amount of information fills up our mind by internet,newspapers,television,etc.It’s wonderful for us to keep so much information that we can not acquired ever.What’s more,we have gained many ways to get what we want to know.However,as the saying goes,” a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention”.With information explosion,our minds will be disturbing or out of concentration.As a conclusion,it’s vital for us to maintain the skill that ignore irrelevant information. I am pleased to show my opinions as follows.First of all,though information all about it,what we should do is not avoiding it,instead, face up with it.In addition,now that we cannot avoid it,in other ways,it is wise to sort out of it.In details,it means that we should distinguish useful information from those that distract us.Only in that way,can we dispose the information wisely and make it useful to us.In a word,classifying the information is worthwhile.

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