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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5748
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章高级词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,a great amount of information fills up our mind by internet,newspapers,television,etc.It’s wonderful for us to keep so much information that we can not acquired ever.What’s more,we have gained many ways to get what we want to know.However,as the saying goes,” a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention”.With information explosion,our minds will be disturbing or out of concentration.As a conclusion,it’s vital for us to maintain the skill that helps us ignore irrelevant information.

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