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Nowadays,a great amount of information fills up our mind by internet,newspapers,television,etc.It’s wonderful for us to keep so much information that we can not acquired ever.What’s more,we have gained many ways to get what we want to know.However,as the saying goes,” a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention”.With information explosion,our minds will be disturbing or out of concentration.As a conclusion,it’s vital for us to maintain the skill that helps us ignore irrelevant information.