文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
I am pleased to show my opinions as follows.First of all,though information all about it,what we should do is not avoiding it,instead, face up with it.In addition,now that we cannot avoid it,in other ways,it is wise to sort out of it.In details,it means that we should distinguish useful information from those that distract us.Only in that way,can we dispose the information wisely and make it useful to us.In a word,classifying the information is worthwhile.