语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇。
I have a good friend,his name is Li Hua,he like playing football and playing guitar,we are in the same class, and he does well in his study,when I have troubles in study,I always ask for help from him,he is very friendly.We often play toghter after school happily. There is one funny thing happen to him,one day,he is late for school,and when he arrived at the class,our math teacher was writing something on the blackboard,he went into classroom and sat down quickly,the teacher didn't see him,that was very funny, a lot of students laughed besides me.