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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中用词稍显贫乏，请多使用高级词汇；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
From:hubin@163.com To:KPOHsales@hotmail.com Dear: I'm Hubin.I have been known your new product that number is 5670 on the exhibition during December 15th to 22th in New York.I am very interested in your new product.So I hope your company can send a price list and instruction to us.Thank you for your coporation,and we hope we can establish business relationship. Your sel
