2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Nowadays，more and more computer are comed into family home.And many people dose not apart computr in their daliy life.And these behaves cacued man relay computer,for example,when students have some questions in study,they will turn to computer for help without their own thinking at once.But,computer bring many more convenient in our daliy life.So,what is realy computer bringing,convenient or raly. In my opinion,I believe that they are both existent.When men lose control himself on play computer games,that will be bad thing.When men use computer to study ,it will be a convenience.The border of bad or good in computer will choice by yourself.If you have a good schedul,you will be a men controling computer.But if you lose yourself on computer,you will be controling by computer. All of all,the best way to play computer at useful is that we must control our schedul best,and lose ourselves.