作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
Do you want to be famous?Why or why not. A:hello,guys, Did you watch the star show last night? B:yes,it’s very amazing.they are so coll,beautiful and talented. I love all of them. C:I couldn’t agree more. D:Really?I missed it ,can you tell me? B:of course.let’s see,there are many pictures about them in my camera. A:where....I want see pictures too.it’s not enough to see the show. C:Oh,These pictures are very lifelike and can show their performances completely. D:eh,Did you ever dream of becoming famous? A:Sound good,I want to be famous now,and my idol is Mr. Li.I want to be a star like him. D:How about you?B. B;No,I don’t,I prefer to live in a more free life. C:I don’t think I will be famous,because I also don’t like being famous,and being famous will make me feel tired. D:A,you said you want to be famous,are there some people inspired you? A:yes,I ever heard a story when I was ten years old.The story described a famous star leading other people to help homeless. Because of he's famous, so people were willing to follow him. B:It’s so great,I’ll try to being famous after you said that.Ha Ha. C:You are a really easy person to change your views. B:I don’t think so,You can take me as a very easy person to accept the right idea. D:I think B is right,I admire him. A:Maybe all of you are right,but I just tell you that we should be a person who we want to be.Do not blind follow somebody. B:yeah ,yeah,I’m hungry,let’s go to eat something.How about. A,C,D:let’s go.