2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误。

Nowadays，more and more computers are coming into family home.And many people dose not apart computr in their daliy life.And these behave cacued man relay computer,for example,when students have some questions in study,they will turn to computer for help without their own thinking at once.But,computer bring many more convenient in our daliy life.So,what is realy computer bringing,convenient or raly. In my opinion,I believe that they are both existent.When men lose control himself on play computer games,that will be bad thing.When man use computer to study ,it will be a convenience.The border of bad or good in plying computer will choice by yourself.If you have a good schedul,you will be a man controling computer.But if you lose yourself on computer,you will be controlling by computer. All of all,the best way to play computer in useful is that we must control our schedul best,and lose ourselves.