2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

Nowadays，more and more computers are coming into family home.And many people dose not apart computr in their daily life.And these behave caused man relay computer,for example,when students have some questions in study,they will turn to computer for help without their own thinking at once.But,computer bring many more convenient in our daily life.So,what is realy computer bringing,convenient or raly. In my opinion,I believe that they are both existent.When men lose control himself on play computer games,that will be bad thing.When man use computer to study ,it will be a convenience.The border of bad or good in plying computer will choice by yourself.If you have a good schedule,you will be a man controlling computer.But if you lose yourself on computer,you will be controlling by computer. All of all,the best way to play computer in useful is that we must control our schedule best,and lose ourselves.